This ghazal by Dr. Mani is written in the meter 121222
121222 — a rhythm that powerfully conveys grief, longing,
and emotional turmoil.
Each couplet presents a hypothetical scenario, using the
word “if’ to reflect on love, fate, and the emotional
Consequences of absence or presence. The structure invites
the reader into an introspective world of “what could have
been,” which adds to its melancholic charm.
1. Mir Taqi Mir: His poetry also employs soft pain and
imagined longing — “Mir, how naive you are, falling ill for
The very one who caused your pain…” Mani reflects a
similar simplicity, but with modern language.
2. Ghalib: Frequently uses and wish to paint
philosophical longings — “Thousands of desires, each
worth dying for…” Mani’s ghazal, like Ghalib’s, delves into
imaginary complaints, but with greater clarity and
emotional resonance.